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Post by boelsen on Oct 16, 2003 19:57:53 GMT 7
i think we would.... cause like you could like write like books and like stuff...... and i could get the chicks with my umm.... hmmm..... i dunno.... sidekick.. ;D.. Josh! ;D ;D
Maybe.... yeah...like.. hmm.... maybe we shouldnt then ;D ;D
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Post by toolgasm on Oct 16, 2003 20:01:03 GMT 7
I know - Michael can write the books, I can edit them, and you can have the job of convincing everyone that they're NOT bland and generic  You seem to be good at that |
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Post by boelsen on Oct 16, 2003 20:03:12 GMT 7
lol.. sounds like a good idea....  i'll have to speak to my manager tho, and yeah.... might get off ot bed then,... gotta get my harry potter costume ready for school on tuesday.. got a dress up thingy day cause its our second last day of yr 12! |
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Post by toolgasm on Oct 16, 2003 20:05:46 GMT 7
lol you have fun with that...  Take pictures! I think I speak for the whole of Ozphoria when I say that I want to see what Scotty Boelsen looks like as Harry Potter! ;D Should I give kanzax a yell to ditch the White Stripes gig, get over to your place and tuck you in? |
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Post by toolgasm on Oct 17, 2003 20:05:58 GMT 7
So how's it going Michael? Plugging along ok?  |
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Post by sunkissed on Oct 18, 2003 9:05:20 GMT 7
mmmmmmm good!
i worked out an ending
it came to me in a cheesy warm coke induced haze
the steady drone of my computer and the eerie white glow of my computer screen lit my dim room...*cough*
ill stop now
back to writing
exciting
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Post by pumpkinlily on Oct 18, 2003 14:53:49 GMT 7
very nice story, i'm pissed off that i was too late to have any influencial say... i'll say this anyway...a short story, was basically first introduced as a way to write intensly and powerfully while quite often over exhagerating disciptive language. so i kinda go against what SPchick said, although it's a very valid point...i dunno, i guess you can look at poe or irving and their story lines, while remaining the most important aspect, we are impacted and enticed to read on...anyway, enough with the babbling, i'm sure you'll get throught it without any of my wisdom whatsoever...i just wanna say, i realy like this bit "Clutching his bruised ribs as he laughed silently , ‘maybe even broken’ he thought" powerful, challenging, i like it. |
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the gloaming
we are accidents waiting to happen
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Post by nitrousovercast on Oct 18, 2003 18:51:04 GMT 7
there was something i was going to say about this, and of course i've completely forgotten what it was. damn amnesia maybe....just maybe....he is on drugs, and/or he killed someone, and therefore is on the run from the fuzz (sorry, i just love saying that). also if you wanted him to wake up, as in from a dream, the walls of the factory could become the padded walls of a room in a mental hospital or something... well...actually now that i think about it that reminds me of Identity. Goddammit. ok well i am no help whatsoever. |
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Post by sunkissed on Oct 19, 2003 18:59:18 GMT 7
im so happy with what im writing yay! i dont know if its good though lol but i like the direction its now going in |
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Post by SPchick on Oct 19, 2003 19:34:43 GMT 7
isnt that the greatest feeling.
its like when people react well to your work, it makes you feel like your actually connecting, rather than just putting words on a page.
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Post by sunkissed on Oct 19, 2003 19:37:29 GMT 7
yes yes indeedy
it feels so so good
*back to writing*
nuff said
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ghost child
wish I could help you to hate me
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Post by Mediel on Oct 24, 2003 15:07:13 GMT 7
dammit i'm too late too
oh well glad you like what you're writing though
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